Been single all your life or not, have had many relationships or whatsoever, there’s an irresistible flavour of first love that remain etched in our memory forever. Some worked, some didn’t and some were unrequited…
No matter how far we have moved on in our lives, or how many years have passed, even today, when you see him/her, your first love, you cannot help but smile! You may not have any feelings for that person, but you still go down the memory lane, remembering those days of the past, when you fell in love for the first time…
so here’s a poem to that first love, a feeling that we still cherish…
An Ode to my First Love
That smile on your face, the way you flipped your hair,
Among the laughter and fuzzy blues,
You turned out to be the antidote to my despair!
The first time our hands touched in the crowd,
I wavered but you didn’t even blink an eye,
You sure heard my heart beat so loud,
And the ecstasy of youth almost made me cry!
I watched you walk away, but I didn’t say a word,
The feelings inside of me began to tremble and overflow,
You kissed another girl, the confession of a love bird,
But you will never know who you were to me,
The sparkle in my eyes, the essence of my very first love!
I adored you, I made a sketch do you remember?
You smiled and pocketed it, I wonder if you ever cared to note my number,
That day, when I dressed up like a doll, were you even watching me laugh?
I wish you glanced just this once, I wish I had the guts to bring that up!
©thegirlonthego08 2017
Too sweet
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Thank you so much! And you’re really very sweet! ☺
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Good evening 🐞
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Good evening ☺
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This is so wonderful, it made me remember my first love as well and I think i will write a poem on my first love lol . Once again, this is beautiful
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Oh thank you Ken! Yeah do write that! I’d love to read! Your poems are always a delight!! ☺
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😆😊 thank you
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You’re most welcome! 😃😁
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it is just wonderfull…………..creating a perfect picture in front of ur eyes damn!!!! SOO BEAUTIFULL
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Thank you so much Pankhudi for this lovely comment!! I’m so glad you loved it! 😃☺
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YES I DID!!! IT IS SOOO GUD 🙂 U MOST WELCOME 🙂
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Aw, such a lovely poem and it’s so true.
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Oh thank you so much Samantha!!! 😃☺😁
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You’re just sooo good!!!👏👏👏👏.
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That’s really very generous of you..thank you soo much!!!😃☺
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Aww, adorable and all sweet❤ and yet it didn’t leave out the pain of it never being worked out.
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That’s such a nice compliment!! Thank you really very much!!😃☺
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This poem is perfect to describe a first love. It explained my every thought.
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Thank you very much! That’s so good to know! 😃☺
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Your poetry made me dial her number.. and it felt so good to hear the voice once you were so fond of.
One of the core reasons why first love is hard to forget is because it is pure and innocent. People don’t fall in love for the first time with expectations or malicious intentions. It is pure attraction, led by the mind and not the heart.
The beginnings of first love are free of malice and manipulative behavior. The whole world seems beautiful and life becomes perfect. It is like wearing rose tinted sunglasses 24/7, even in your dreams.
This blissful feeling of first love can never be replicated because once innocence is lost on a personal level, it can never be translated in its purest form in another relationship. This is what makes it so special. 🙂
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It’s always such a pleasure to hear to from you Neal! Yes, I absolutely agree with you. First love is the most special kind of love, something that we can never forget..and did you really call her? That’s so nice to know..I’m very glad that you liked my poem! ☺
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Of course I did.. couldn’t resist.. She is Happy with her own family 🙂
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That’s amazing! ☺
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I love it!
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Thank you so much Joseyphina!☺
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First love is a strange one isn’t it? In hindsight it’s both more powerful and less consequential than any other love. It means more because it’s the first time you feel the feelings and you feel them SO INTENSELY, and also less because you’re too young to understand love properly.
I loved this. And I love this comment box! Makes me want to mail someone a letter!
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Such a lovely comment! Thank you so much for the appreciation! 😃☺
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I will rate this as the poem I have ever read. You actually took me to a different world. It’s very true, first love is special. Even though most of us falling in love first time at a very early age which is considered to be the age of immature decisions, first love still holds its ground. That look can still bring a smile in any situation. I’m running out of words……..Awesome work!
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That’s such a big compliment!!! Thank you so much Joseph for this lovely comment!! 😃☺
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Best poem*….That’s the word missing there
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Great Poem! It put me back to middle school remembering my first crush. It wasn’t love but it was the nervous feeling of being vulnerable and not knowing how the other person felt. Thank you as this poem brought a smile upon my face 🙂 .
-Luna
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Such a beautiful comment! Thank you soo much! 😃☺
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You’re very welcome!
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Aww! Thanks for the stroll down Memory Lane! 💜👍😉
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That’s so nice of you say!☺😁
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*to say
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Aw! Even an aromantic like me can appreciate this 🙂
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That’s such a nice compliment! Thanks so much for the appreciation! 😃☺😁
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Wow such a awesome poem. Loved it.
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Thank you so much!! 😁
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First love has his own flavor.
A great poem, and am so glad to connect.
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Thank you so much for the kind compliment! Happy to connect as well! 😃☺
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Ahh, first love! There really is nothing like it. And then comes the love that lasts a lifetime. And, if you’re really fortunate, they’re one and the same.
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Yes, totally! And that happens only to really lucky people…😃😁
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This is so beautifully written ☺️
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Thank you so much!! ☺😁
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No worries ☺️ Glad I came across your blog.
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Same here!! 😃😁
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Amazing
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Thank you! ☺😁
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Welcome
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What a pleasant surprise Victor! Thank you so much for the love!! 😃☺😁
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Anytime 😁😁😁
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Great to meet you, found you as a nominee for my The Blog-aholic award. So glad as now I can also follow you.
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That’s a beautiful award you created! And I’m already following you.. ☺
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Mwah – thank you so much for your kind words. Happy blogging and thanks for the follow
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My pleasure! 🙂
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❤
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Yes first love can be sweet but most of the time it’s not the unforgettable one lol
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Haha..I know 😁
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Omg….I want to fall in love!
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Haha..thank you so much! 😃😁
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Loved the poem 🙂 The way you have put it.. I think everybody can associate with it 🙂
i am really glad to have come across your blog 🙂
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Thank you so much for the appreciation! I’m glad to have discovered your blog too!☺😁
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So damn true. My first is now happily married with 2 children and I couldn’t be happier for her.
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That’s amazing! 🙂
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So beautiful!
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Thank you so much Sara! ☺
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Welcome!!
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Beautiful
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Thank you! ☺
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It’s funny how first love sneaks up on you, isn’t it. I like the casual nature of the touch of hands that means so much to you and yet little to him. Spot on!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you could feel it 🙂
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first love never die…nika costa
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