Where most of us lose ourselves in the midst of the ruckus we call life, take a moment and wander through the expanse of your soul, who knows, may be you’ll find yourself once again!
When you touch my locks with hands so crisp and delicate,
And look into my eyes, as I gaze right back into the abyss of yours,
I see a home so dear, like the warmth of your skin in sweater weather,
The sweetness of your embrace, a kaleidoscopic array of emotions.
Take me away, where the sun shines the brightest,
Our feet dug deep into the sand against the perpetual glee of the ocean colossal,
Take me away, where winter colors my cheeks crimson red,
And a snowflake melts into an icy rapture, the second it touches the tip of my tongue,
Take me away, where I can delve deeper into my psyche,
A crude thought, incongruous to my actuality,
Take me away, where I can find myself all over again,
Above the horrors of my darkest fears, beneath the tantalising desires.
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Dear readers, this is to remind you again we are accepting submissions for our online magazine Bumblebee. Submit your works via email to either
Me : sweetsymphony8@gmail.com
or to
Cheila : pinkfordays@outlook.pt
“Take me away, where winter colors my cheeks crimson red”- a lovely line.
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Thank you so much! 😀 🙂 🙂
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I love it!
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Thank you so much! ^_^ 🙂 😀
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Loved your poem!!
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I’m so glad you did! 🙂 ^_^ 🙂
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Wonderful
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Thank you very much!
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Beautifully written😇 Love your posts ☺💝
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That’s so nice to hear! Thank you soo much! 🙂 🙂
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You’re most welcome ☺💙
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Refreshing, thank you for sharing your writing.
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Glad you liked it! Thanks a lot!
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Can you share some details about your magazine?
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Sure! Here’s everything you need to know :
https://wordscantfathom.wordpress.com/2017/06/02/presenting-to-you-bumblebee-%f0%9f%90%9d/
Feel free to ask if you need to know something else too!
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K. Thanks
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That’s beautiful! 😊
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Glad you loved it Shweta! ^_^ 🙂 🙂
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I am also a poet.I loved your poem.
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Thank you very much!
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You are welcome. I am actually new user here.Can you help me how to get more people engaged in my poem?
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Sure! You can follow the Daily post by WordPress who host Community pool for bloggers to discuss about their posts and introduce. And you can follow other bloggers and comment on their blogs. I’m sure they’ll reciprocate!
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Thanks
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I wish someone or something would take me away like that! This was such a beautiful poem!
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Thank you for such a beautiful compliment! 🙂 🙂
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This is awesome and beautiful! 👏
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Thank you so much! 🙂 🙂
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https://artist179.wordpress.com/
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Nice poem
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Thank you! 🙂
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i hope i have that someone who can take me away ❤
inspiring poem ❤
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
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😊❤
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This was a beautiful poem. I found it’s message very inspiring.
I also have a question about your online magazine, Bumblebee. Are there any restrictions to what type of poem you’re allowed to submit? For example, no profanity, or anything dark? And are you allowed to submit more than one poem in hopes one will be chosen?
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I apologize. Forget my question, because I just read the gap for submission has already ended 😜
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Hi! No, actually we have extended the deadline to 15th of July. So you still have time 🙂
And, you can submit poems under any genre and more than one submission is definitely acceptable! So feel free to send us your articles 🙂 🙂
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Okay, that is great! Thank you so much 🙂
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I love this
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Really glad! Thank you so much! 🙂 🙂
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Hi I really liked your poem. I also write poems for my blog and I would be glad if I would get a chance to submit them for ur magzine. My poems are on my blog so would you mind taking a look at them and letting me know if they are good enough to be a part of ur magzine?
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Hello! I read your poems and they are in fact quite amazing..but for Bumblebee we are only accepting articles which have never been published before..so if you wish to send us your work, please make sure it’s new and original! 🙂 🙂
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Ohk. I will send you few articles that are still unpublished.
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Well written…I loved it
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Thank you so much! 🙂 🙂
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Nice piece
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Thanks a lot! 🙂
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Lovely and inspiring poem. Thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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Thank you so much !
And truly my pleasure! 🙂 🙂
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Like the line….”like the warmth of your skin in sweater weather, “
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Thank you very much! 🙂 🙂
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❤❤
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🙂 🙂
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You write beautifully.
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Thank you for such a lovely compliment! ♡♡♡
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Thank you very much!
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Hey there plz check mine new poem “the least they knew”
Thanks😇
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Nice poem
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Splendid line “Our feet dug deep into the sand against the perpetual glee of the ocean colossal,”😊
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love it..!..like u r poem
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Absolutely loved it. I just started my blog ( https://stecydsouza.wordpress.com/ ) and would love it if you could read my poems
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Love it!
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Thank you!
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Lovely poem. I love it.❤
I hope you could visit my site too and give feedback on how i can improve it. Thank you!
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Thank you! Yeah, sure I will 🙂
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Nice poem..write from heart
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Thank you very much! 😊
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Awesome!
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Thanks! 😊
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You are welcome 🙂 I hope you like my work to 🙂
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👌🏻
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Thank you! 🙂
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like u r poem !
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The last three lines are brilliant, the poem entirely is exceptional. The line, “crude thought incongruous to my actuality” was striking, especially when it was followed by “Take me away, where I can find myself all over again, Above the horrors of my darkest fears, beneath the tantalising desires.”
My interpretation of these lines is that there is magnetic attraction to darkness, to the indulgences we know we should be best without.
This is a strong work. 🙂
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I couldn’t be happier! Thank you for such an encouraging comment…thanks a lot for taking the time and interpreting it..this means a lot! 🙂 ♡♡♡
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like u r poem !
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Beautiful..
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Love ur poem !
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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like u r poem ! Love ur poem !
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like u r poem !
This is a strong work.
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https://poetsalbum.wordpress.com/2017/09/02/merry-go-round/
Your like would be very much appreciated. This is an activity given to us and I need a total of 150 likes to pass. Thank you so much!
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Sure, no problem! 🙂 🙂
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“Take me away, where winter colors my cheeks crimson red”… This is such a great description…
and i absolutely love the artwork! Did you make it yourself?
http://www.poetrypost.co.uk
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Thanks! No, it has been taken from Google images which belongs to Ravenhawk’s magazine as mentioned below the picture 🙂
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This is beautiful
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Well written..
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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like u r poem ! .
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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That’s really beautifully written😮. Do look at this poem that i wrote and tell me what you think about it: https://hardikrane29.wordpress.com/2017/09/08/the-special-eyes/
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Thank you! Sure, I would love to read yours too 🙂
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Very well worded 😊
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Thank you very much! 😊
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Beautiful!
P.S. I had to use dictionary. Several times.
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Hahaha tui porli? 😂😅🙈
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Haa .Valo likhechis. Aro lekh.
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